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PostSubject: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:06 pm

Carl walked briskly into the Toran Arena, thoughts of the past few days behind him. His two matches with Auren, his several unsuccessful wild Natrelmon encounters, one of which almost caused a full-blown forest fire, Carl mused. Crowire, like always, floated beside him. Carl didn't really see the need for secrecy considering Crowire was the only Natrelmon in his bag of tricks.

He stepped to his platform, and announced boldly:

"Toran Arena Master, I challenge you! Do you accept?"
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:41 pm

Eclipse Westing, a man who looked exactly like Night, except ALOT more muscular, with more age lines on his face, was sleeping all the way on the otherside of the the Arena when the challenger busted in to his Gym. " Wai- What? I'm awak, I'm awake! " Eclipse said tiredly as he heard the trainer yell from 60 feet away, though it was fainter by then. Apparently he seemed to have the same lazy personality has Night when not battling. But by that logic he probably had Night's determination when fighting IN a battle. Looking and sizing up this newbie, and wondered if he was any good.

" Well, I accept your challenge, you may run through the field with your Natrelmon and all that other stuff. Anyway, just get on the- " He stopped mid sentence to yawn for a bit, before he rolled onto his and pushed off his hands. Sending himself from the ground to his feet. " Anyway, just get on the big rock over there on the edge if you want to start the battle. Its pretty much the platform around here. "

Stepping up onto the Pride-Rock-Shaped boulder that served as the platform in this Arena, Eclipse twisted his neck to the side and cracked it. " Okay, now I'm ready, we'll begin whenever you are too. "
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:30 pm

"I am ready. " Carl said. He was planning to launch a preemptive strike, but a weird feeling told him not to. For Carl, battling was about instinct.

"Go on, Crowire. " Carl said. This was their code for "go out, but remain on high alert."

Crowire obeyed, flapping out into the Arena, enjoying the help the thermal gave.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:37 pm

Taking out a combat knife, Eclipse yawned again as a red smoke drifted out of the strange relic flowed fluidly to a rock 10 feet in front of him. He looked up at the Crowire, which, beneathe it's feathers, would feel nice and toasty, and somewhat tired from the heat as it got farther up. Flying Natrelmon flew much swifter and faster in this Gym, at the expense of some energy. Though really it didn't do much to help those on the ground unless they made the bird really fly, and got the thing incredibly tired. But that took time, and Eclipse didn't think this challenger was the kind of guy who took his time.

The smoke on the rock materialized and became a solid-ish shape of fire. With two leaves as eyes, the mini pyrefiend that was Emleaf crouched low on the rock, ready for action.

Also, since Crowire was in the air, Carl would have to be louder for his commands to reach the bird.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:44 pm

"Radio Wave, Crowire! " Carl yelled to his Natrelmon. Crowire did so, spreading the electricity across the air. It would significantly lessen Emleaf's reaction time due to it's low level. Crowire was already near Emleaf, so it would give no chance for the Leader to interrupt him.

"Shadow Assault! " For this, Crowire gathered up it's own shadow. It materialized the dark energy and fired it in a rain of black bullets at and around Emleaf. Due to Radio Wave, Emleaf couldn't dodge them all, and it's relic would begin to glow.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:59 pm

As soon a Carl said " Radio " Eclipse ordered Emleaf sternly and quickly in a heightened tone and volume of voice. "Emleaf, try dodging before he fires, you should be able to dodge it a few seconds before he hits you that way! " Emleaf, who was already crouched low, nodded to this, and tried to dodge as soon as Carl finished saying Shadow Assault. Of course, Emleaf failed to dodge just as Crowire fired, but due to the distance of about 35 feet between them, and the fact that Crowire was shooting from an angle, and all it's attacks were aimed high, Emleaf simply sprung fowarrd from his crouch.

Moments after springing foward off the rock he was on, Emleaf rolled, to which Eclipse began to order another move to compensate for the Radio Wave, " Singe it now! " The dark bullets that Crowire had fired smashed the ground and rocks completely to pieces where Emleaf was standing moments before. And as it completed it's roll, it's mind just then was able to register what Eclipse had said. Holding it's arms out while opening what looked like a mouth, Emleaf fired three singe bullets, all arced to compensate for the thirty feet between it and Crowire. They would land from above on it's forehead, and wings.

Emleaf crouched low again, following Eclipses earlier order ot try and dodge when the challenger made a move.

All this took about 10 seconds, includig the 6 seconds it took Emleaf to register his own dodge before it made it, another few seconds for when the Shadow Assault destroyed where it was standing while he was rolling, and the two more seconds it took to register Eclipses order as he was rolling.

Indeed the seconds may not have looked like much, but it only took one second more of hesitation to die against a stronger Natrelmon. While this was all hapening, Eclipse ran foward and jumped off his rock platform, he needed to be in the battle to react for his Natrelmon. He was about 9 feet away from Emleaf.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:05 pm

"Now! Dive and Multibolt! " Carl said, at the exact same moment Emleaf fired the Singe Bullets. "

Crowire soared quickly and scythed through the air, well below the Bullets. It skimmed the ground, straight ahead of Emleaf, and the Multibolt would hit Emleaf due to the tremendous acceleration and speed Crowire gained. Emleaf wouldn't be able to account for Radio Wave this time, as it was still receiveing commands from its Trainer. Crowire locked on like a sniper, heading straight for it, and loosed all three Multibolts straight for it. Due to the close distance, and speed of the Bolts Emleaf would have to be recalled immediately. Only a few seconds seperated it and certain doom. Carl knew that Emleaf couldn't react in time, and would have to be recalled.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:58 pm

Just before Emleaf was hit, it's entire being dissolved into smoke, which was sucked into Eclipse's relic knife like a whirlpool. Eclipse could have done more, but hey, he was the firts Gym, his job was to ease trainers into the process of battling. The multibolts slammed into the rocks harmlessly, and Eclipse gave a hearty laugh while clapping his hands.

" Good job! You've defeated my first Natrelmon! I hope you have other Natrelmon though, because your gonna wanna save that Crowire for last! "

Next, Eclipse grabbed the small sheathe for his knife and pulled it out, though instead of returning the knife to it, he held it outwards. This time the smoke flew out of the opening faster, and formed into a small fiery cat, about 6 feet in front of him. It was crouched and ready to dodge already. It's sense were a little more heightened being a cat then some of Eclipse' other Natrelmon.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:58 am

[550 XP from Crowire v Emleaf 1. Just keeping track.]

As it loosed the Multibolts, Crowire rose and completed a sharp curving flight, coming to rest at about ten feet high and ten feet away from the forming Natrelmon. Crowire was still raring to go, and after defeating Emleaf, he was ready and raring to go. Carl was pleased as well, his strategy worked fine.

"Multibolt!" Carl yelled, and Crowire fired one bolt at, one to the left, and one to the right of Ocalia.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Mon Apr 26, 2010 7:01 pm

" Foward Ocalia! " Ordered Eclipse, causing Ocalia to pause a moment as the Multibolts were fired and came dangerously close. But, like before, due to Crowire's angle, they were aimed a bit high, so Ocalia's graceful pounce foward allowed the dangerous projectiles to shock the ground it used to be on. " Burn it! " Eclipse stated, jumping from rock to rock until he was about six feet up in the air on a rock 8 feet to the right of Ocalia. The distance between Ocalia in Crowire was about 20 feet, counting elevation, 26. When the multibolts hit the rock, Ocalia fired four Singe Bullets from it's mouth, one after the other at the chest of Crowire. Eclipse kept a close watch on everything that was happening, he was looking for an opening.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 5:37 am

"Left slightly, and use Shock! " Carl yelled at Crowire, but not harshly. This was said as soon as the Leader started jumping from rock to rock. The shock zoomed towards the repositioned Ocalia, just before it started firing the Singe Bullets. As it was occupied, it would most likely be hit with the Shock. Carl knew that Eclipse was skilled, still, but he liked his chances.

"Follow up with Radio Wave!" Carl said. Crowire fired the electricity off into the air.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:24 pm

Due to the fact that Ocalia was still in movement while the order was issued ( As decreed by Nalt, I was planning something completely different to null this move and KO Sparwire. ) the Spark was fired before it reached it's new position, meaning the attack quite plainly missed it's target. Since Crowire also moved before Ocalia fired, it was still in it's new spot when Ocalia began firing towards it's chest. And since it had done nothing to dodge, all four Singe Bullets hit. However, due to Ocalia's level, they were enough to cause Carl's relic to glow but not enough to seriously damage Crowire, who would be slowly losing altitude, or plummeting depending on how good it was at taking damage.

Eclipse looked at Carl, and gave him a wide smile. " You were very good! Most trainers switch Natrelmon by the time they get to Ocalia, if you don't have one, still pretty good, most trainers with less than two Natrelmon don't come at all! I also think your Crowire grew quite a bit from defeating Emleaf! Just use him to catch a powerful Natrelmon around Toran's shores and you should be able to quite literally destroy me in your next challenge! "
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:44 pm

((I was asked for a ruling, and I've ruled the logic of your shock invalid.

"Left slightly, and use Shock! " Carl yelled at Crowire, but not harshly. This was said as soon as the Leader started jumping from rock to rock. The shock zoomed towards the repositioned Ocalia, just before it started firing the Singe Bullets. As it was occupied, it would most likely be hit with the Shock. Carl knew that Eclipse was skilled, still, but he liked his chances.

" Burn it! " Eclipse stated, jumping from rock to rock until he was about six feet up in the air on a rock 8 feet to the right of Ocalia. The distance between Ocalia in Crowire was about 20 feet, counting elevation, 26. When the multibolts hit the rock, Ocalia fired four Singe Bullets from it's mouth, one after the other at the chest of Crowire. Eclipse kept a close watch on everything that was happening, he was looking for an opening.




Keep in mind yes you state the shock is 'before' it fires Singe bullets, after it has stopped moving, but that said, the two attacks would cross in mid-air and collide as the shock and singe bullet are happening at what we can call the exact same time, due to reaction times and general delays. Sorry avoid my previous confusion in distance, that was due to semi-ambiguous wording in previous posts.

Final ruling: Odds are shock would be fired, but so would singe bullets, meaning the lead singe bullet probably strikes the shock, as Crowire's movement happens before it fires shock, before the first singe bullet, meaning that the attack was not dodged.



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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:25 am

[Ruling has been changed, and I shall continue.]
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:18 am

"Dodge, duck, and use Shadowed Expansion, Crowire!" Carl yelled at the Natrelmon, who was performing well. The Shadows began to lengthen.

Carl ordered a command quickly when he saw the Shock and Singe Bullet impacting in the air. Crowire had plenty of space to move, so it was entirely feasible that Crowire could dodge. Crowire simply moved to the left, ducked slightly, and the Singe Bullets passed him by.

"Whirlwind!" Carl said. Crowire used the Whirlwind, and it aimed just in front of Ocalia.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:50 pm

(( Due to Nalt again ruling that Crowire's path had already been decided by you in previous posts, the defense used was not valid, and Inn answered my question of whether 4 Singe Bullets to the chest of a level 12 Flying type from a level 9 Fire would KO the Flying Type, the answer is yes. ))

Due to the attacks already being fired, and Carl had already ordered his Natrelmon to move previously, Crowire wasn't able to dodge the attack and was hit squarely in the chest. If the challenger had used a Feeble Walls on the first three attacks, Crowire may have had time to dodge. Though this wasn't the case this time, the challenger should note thay next time they showed up, they would most likely win, and if they had trouble on Volcanonl, to try this. The Singe Bullets knocked the wind out of Crowire, and left a huge pain in the front as the coal left a big bruse and the fire singed some feathers off the front. If treated now with a Minor Cure a few times by both the Gym Master and Challenger, Crowire would be just fine.

Eclipse stated what was posted previously once more. After the fact of the two trainers healing Crowire.

(( Sorry for the hastened post, I gotta post for Cold then Nalt. ))
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:53 pm

(No. Paul said I could dodge, ask him. Stop challenging every little thing and edit your post.)
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:55 pm

(( I didn't, Nalt asked if I could post, and I explained that you dodged so the battle hadn't ended. He said that you couldn;t have dodged because you already stated your Crowire's path in a previous post.

Then I asked Inn if four Singe Bullets to the chest would be a KO, and he said yes. ))
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:55 am

(( Had you note made the post in the way you did after the crossing of the attacks in air, yes, you would have been able to dodge most likely by stating you continued on a particular path or something.

At this point, the Singe Bullets strike, but you are not KO'd. Since the Shock would be on the path of the Singe Bullets, at least one of them would be taken out and probably mess up the trajectory of the others by causing damage to the lead one. At any rate, I rule that two of the Singe Bullets strike the Crowire. Where can be determined by you, but I think the chest would be difficult to validate.

The battle continues. ))
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:36 am

[Ignore my previous post, then.]

Carl watched as the two Singe Bullets hit Crowire in the lower chest. Crowire was able to maintain flight and direction, but Carl could tell it hurt. They didn't do much individually, but together they did a fair enought.

"Shadowed Expansion, Crowire!" Carl said. Crowire was now far enough away and still alert enough to dodge at any point. The Shadows began to lengthen due to Shadowed Expansion.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:25 pm

Crowire, though still up, simply needed to be hit by one more Singe Bullet to be KO'd, and this was all Eclipse needed. The bird was already 2/3rds down and would be visibly tired by now. Eclipse just needed to bide his time and strike when the time was right. " Ocalia, keep a look out on everything the Crowire does with your eyes! " Ordered the Arena master as soon as his Challenger told Crowire to use Shadow Expansion. Ocalia, being a cat, had a natural abilities to reflect light with it's eyes to see more in the dark. Anything Crowire did that wasn't behind a solid, colored object would be seen by Ocalia.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:04 pm

"Use Whirlwind in front of Ocalia, Crowire!" Carl said. Also, Carl noticed, the Leader would think Crowire would be tired by now. This was not the case. Sure, Crowire was injured, but no, he wasn't that tired that he couldn't finish. Crowire was still able to go strong, but Carl didn't think he could take another pummeling. Ocalia could easily avoid the Whirlwind. By now Shadowed Expansion had connected the shadows of few of the tallest-standing rocks into a misshapen amalgamation of shadow. Crowire was near a few of the said large rocks, all of them within easy flying distance.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Sun May 02, 2010 11:12 am

As Carl was in the middle of saying "in" after he said Whirlwind, Eclipse ordered immedietly. " Singe it! " He yelled sideways to Ocalia, who obliged his request without much difficulty. Four Singe Bullets were fired directly from Ocalia's mouth at the Whirlwind that began to form in front of Crowire. The Whirlwinds pull speeded up the attacks, which were closing in on Crowire. It was gonna be close, Eclipse wasn't sure what Carl would have his Crowire do.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Mon May 03, 2010 8:03 am

"Crowire, cancel and dodge! " Carl said. Given the distance, Carl knew that Crowire would have plenty of time to dodge, as he simply had to change how his wings beat. Crowire dodged to the left, and the Singe Bullets slammed uselessly into the ground, a while behind Crowire. Crowire remained flapping at a steady pace, ready at any time to dodge. Carl thought this a viable strategy, though mainly because the chips were down and he would have to wait and see what the Leader did.
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PostSubject: Re: The first challenger appears!   Tue May 04, 2010 6:38 pm

Eclipse did nothing, and waited for the challenger to move his Natrelmon. He didn't realize that Omu was able to cancel a move that needed that much concentration and time to make, so quickly as it had. But it was no matter, this battle wasn't over yet, and Omu still only needed to be hit with one Singe Bullet to be KO'd, and Ocalia hadn't been hit yet, which was another good thing. But right now, all that could be played was the waiting game.
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